Suddenly I was in a dark place. I was not able to see a thing. Where am I ? What happened to me? Why this place is so dark? How did I came here? I tried to remember how i came here.Or what is this place actually? Where are my family memebers? But couldn't remember a thing.My head was so pounding.I was getting scared.I need to get out of this place ASAP. All of a sudden I could hear distinct sounds, and i got a ray of hope in this darkness.But I actually couldn't put a hand on this. I tried to remain calm.But my heart won't stopped beating ridiculously.Because I was SCARED. I tried to focus on the distinct sound and Finally I could hear someone or more specifically a girls voice. "Help me. Please help me.I am trapped here. Please release me.Please I beg you help me.Won't you help me?Please help me.I am very lonely. I need a friend. Will you be my friend? And help me out" Was she talking to me? Can she see me? But how came anyone can see anything in this pitch black?Can she feel my presence? Wait is she asking for my help?How could I help her,when I myself is totally cluessless.Maybeh together we could some way to escape from here. She might know something. Hellow!Anybody there?I am stuck here. I can't see anything.Will you please tell me where are you?Do you know what is this place?I don't know how I end up here. I can't remember. Can you help me out?Hellow!! But nobody relpy any of my question. But I could hear the thing"PLEASE HELP ME.PLEASE HELP ME.WON'T YOU HELP ME. I AM LONELY.WILL YOU BE MY FRIEND AND HELP ME OUT" I could not understand why is she repeating the same thing again and again. Ughh!! My headache is unbearable.I could not stand it anymore. Look I will be your....before I could finish the sentence my headache got the best of me and with a scream I lost consciousness.

Story is told by Fabliha_kabir

Fabliha_kabir


DeadRebel, I will try.Tnx thrice

Fabliha_kabir


Inti, I know but the story won't just upload unless I use enough comma's. So I have to use them in useless places.

Inti


I think there are some punctuation mistakes as well. And just a friendly advice please read the story before uploading it. That way you will have less mistakes. And the story was good btw.

DeadRebel


Fabliha_kabir, Okay Im not a English-grammer expert but imo there were a tiny grammatical mistakes maybe Also u could make it more horror and mystery type idk Sorry for replying late

Fabliha_kabir


DeadRebel, I meant to say that will you help me to improve it .P.S.Ignore the previous reply

Fabliha_kabir


DeadRebel, tnx again but will you help me for improving it ...please?

DeadRebel


It Needs A Little Bit Improvement In Some Ares But The Story Was Good