One day we have a big house.after 3 months I heard a scream coming from the basement. I came.but the door was hanging open.I slowly go down after 2 steps someone pulled me in the bathroom.it was my mom she said "be quite there's a man in the basement the one who killed your father" I said "what happend" she did not answer. Later I heard footsteps coming from the basement.we hid in the bathroom.after the man is gone we got out and get a knife in the kitchen.we were going in the bathroom but the man is there.he was looking for us.he's coming upstairs.we called the cops.the cops found the killer.it was our dad.i said "WHY DID YOU KILL PEOPLE IT'S BETTER WHEN UR GONE" he said I'm sorry.the cops gave us money he was wanted.The End.... Thanks for reading my story hope you enjoyed it bye..

Story is told by One day we have a big house after 3 months there where screaming from the basement I came and someone pulled me in the bathroom it was my mom she said "Be quite there's a man who killed your father" I said what happend-To be continued.........

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You had bad grammar and I know you might be little, but don't add periods after every single word. I did like your story though