Messy house
Burning cookies
It crept through the door
Quiet
So quiet
The woman on the couch
Its next victim
It took her hand
And took her soul


(This is my first attempt at poetry. Please tell me if it's bad!)

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Story is told by Tempest

Bloody Mary


Improve it

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Love it.

ImWatchinYou


Not bad tho, you must work with rhymes

Shayashta Stallone


Not bad

Sshachi


Nice

Long John


I like it. I'm not a big fan of poetry myself because of school overdoing it, but I actually really enjoyed this one.

emnn56


This is genuinely very good as a first time!!!!!